Wednesday, January 11, 2012

baby. it fact lyricsCan you please rate my lyrics?

The theme on the song is a love addiction
I state straight facts baby no friction
I’m just wondering how this came about
I guess since her sweets touch the roof of my mouth
She so sweet that the cavity I don’t take it I swallow
You would think but this time my teeth time would be hollow
I use to keep my heart hidden like Waldo
Holding my ticketbaby. it fact lyrics tight wanting to win her lotto
But she switch the winning numbers every time I’m close
When I make her mine I promise I’m do more than boast
Man it seems like this girl has me on a loose rope
Not really bright at math but I’m falling like an negative slope
It’s hard to sleep at night with this current situation
Thoughts in my head saying that tbaby. it fact lyricshe best thing is isolation
But in my heart isolation is me and her together yeah vacation
The weather will be perfect and the shore line amazing
AV儿劣/AV儿劣**
3 1/2, its good really good but you'd wanna make it longer and not rhyme so often and fast
three and a half stars

try to add a chores.
i like it, reading through it was like a rap in my head.

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